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AlishaK

AlishaK

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I’m laying in the bed,
thinking of the last time I made a mistake
The clock struck midnight and I’m dreaming again,
‘I’m running down the stairs, I trip and fall,
a dark shadow standing behind me like a pitfall,
I try to stand back, but someone holds my hand…
As I turn back…’
It’s morning again.
the alarm’s screamin’, insane
and that touch remains a mystery, a pain.
I’ve been through the darkness of the light,
Fell so bad from such a height,
You laughed at me, tried to invade me,
But I love it baby, and now u’ll see what I used to be
Hey! Hello! Are u talking to me?
Remember the first time we met,
U said I was a freak,
But wait haha, what do u mean?
Just cause I’ vent got a Ferrari, is that what u see?
I’m trying to overcome these forces
I’m sick and tired of making messes.
I aint no Tony Stark, owning a weapons-industry
I can’t even use a gun, yet they call him ‘iron man’ and me ‘terrorist’?
Mama told me, go and chase what u want
But I aint no millionaire, I gotta play it hard
And now im here, fighting with my siblings in the backyard
Shit! This can’t be real, I broke my bruv’s arm.
You haters look at me,
Like im a spinning coin,
I spend everyday, so lazy,
Like im on Heroin
Deep inside are buried the cruel secrets of my life
They can’t tell from my face if I’ll be able to fight
‘Cause even Batman wears a mask until you realize
It’s Bruce Wayne in a suit o f a knight!
When the dark force rises
The sun goes and hide,
Until the right time arrives
then the light stabs the evil with a knife!
Brandy skinny stretched up,
I get outa my chevy,
They say check out that chick, She’s got a cool ride
Now what u say baby?
I thought u said im nothing?
Haha, but when u’re done hating,
Dial 999, call my home, I’ll be waiting!

Written By Komal Azam aka AlishaK

I just randomly wrote now. flaminheroes Esme
On your Request. Not my best thou.
Cheers!
 
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AlishaK said:
I’m laying in the bed,
thinking of the last time I made a mistake
The clock struck midnight and I’m dreaming again,
‘I’m running down the stairs, I trip and fall,
a dark shadow standing behind me like a pitfall,
I try to stand back, but someone holds my hand…
As I turn back…’
It’s morning again.
the alarm’s screamin’, insane
and that touch remains a mystery, a pain.
I’ve been through the darkness of the light,
Fell so bad from such a height,
You laughed at me, tried to invade me,
But I love it baby, and now u’ll see what I used to be
Hey! Hello! Are u talking to me?
Remember the first time we met,
U said I was a freak,
But wait haha, what do u mean?
Just cause I’ vent got a Ferrari, is that what u see?
I’m trying to overcome these forces
I’m sick and tired of making messes.
I aint no Tony Stark, owning a weapons-industry
I can’t even use a gun, yet they call him ‘iron man’ and me ‘terrorist’?
Mama told me, go and chase what u want
But I aint no millionaire, I gotta play it hard
And now im here, fighting with my siblings in the backyard
Shit! This can’t be real, I broke my bruv’s arm.
You haters look at me,
Like im a spinning coin,
I spend everyday, so lazy,
Like im on Heroin
Deep inside are buried the cruel secrets of my life
They can’t tell from my face if I’ll be able to fight
‘Cause even Batman wears a mask until you realize
It’s Bruce Wayne in a suit o f a knight!
When the dark force rises
The sun goes and hide,
Until the right time arrives
then the light stabs the evil with a knife!
Brandy skinny stretched up,
I get outa my chevy,
They say check out that chick, She’s got a cool ride
Now what u say baby?
I thought u said im nothing?
Haha, but when u’re done hating,
Dial 999, call my home, I’ll be waiting!
Written By Komal Azam aka AlishaK

I just randomly wrote now. flaminheroes Esme
On your Request. Not my best thou.
Cheers!
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I simply love this poem :)
MashAllah! Kumal... Ur talented, my friend.....
 
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E.H Jane

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So writers, what's your inspiration?
 
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AlishaK said:
I’m laying in the bed,
thinking of the last time I made a mistake
The clock struck midnight and I’m dreaming again,
‘I’m running down the stairs, I trip and fall,
a dark shadow standing behind me like a pitfall,
I try to stand back, but someone holds my hand…
As I turn back…’
It’s morning again.
the alarm’s screamin’, insane
and that touch remains a mystery, a pain.
I’ve been through the darkness of the light,
Fell so bad from such a height,
You laughed at me, tried to invade me,
But I love it baby, and now u’ll see what I used to be
Hey! Hello! Are u talking to me?
Remember the first time we met,
U said I was a freak,
But wait haha, what do u mean?
Just cause I’ vent got a Ferrari, is that what u see?
I’m trying to overcome these forces
I’m sick and tired of making messes.
I aint no Tony Stark, owning a weapons-industry
I can’t even use a gun, yet they call him ‘iron man’ and me ‘terrorist’?
Mama told me, go and chase what u want
But I aint no millionaire, I gotta play it hard
And now im here, fighting with my siblings in the backyard
Shit! This can’t be real, I broke my bruv’s arm.
You haters look at me,
Like im a spinning coin,
I spend everyday, so lazy,
Like im on Heroin
Deep inside are buried the cruel secrets of my life
They can’t tell from my face if I’ll be able to fight
‘Cause even Batman wears a mask until you realize
It’s Bruce Wayne in a suit o f a knight!
When the dark force rises
The sun goes and hide,
Until the right time arrives
then the light stabs the evil with a knife!
Brandy skinny stretched up,
I get outa my chevy,
They say check out that chick, She’s got a cool ride
Now what u say baby?
I thought u said im nothing?
Haha, but when u’re done hating,
Dial 999, call my home, I’ll be waiting!

Written By Komal Azam aka AlishaK

I just randomly wrote now. flaminheroes Esme
On your Request. Not my best thou.
Cheers!
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This pretty awesomee !!
Btw i didn't read it like a poem...more like a song :D
 
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Lorenzo said:
Right so here is one I wrote like two years ago... its a little weird and different, but nothing great. I also wrote it in the present tense which was hard to do but I wanted to see if it had an effect on the story telling so tell me how that worked out too ^^
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This is sooo good !! I loved the way you've described the details and how the man's feeling !
Do you have more stuff like this ?
 
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Lorenzo said:
Right so here is one I wrote like two years ago... its a little weird and different, but nothing great. I also wrote it in the present tense which was hard to do but I wanted to see if it had an effect on the story telling so tell me how that worked out too ^^
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excellent description :D
nice work (y)

you could post it on wattpad!
 
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Esme said:
This is sooo good !! I loved the way you've described the details and how the man's feeling !
Do you have more stuff like this ?
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Haha thank you ^^ Im working on one that is similar, ill post it when im done :)
 
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