Ambitious Writers

[Esme]

Well weell wellll! I love writing but I haven't written any book or stuff.
But I know someone who has. It's a one direction fanfic and here's the link:
http://www.wattpad.com/6267580-i-need-you-more-than-ever-one-direction-fanfiction
check it out and give some feedback. I'll tell her.

Tell your friend to write more... would like to read more of this stuff !

 

[knowitall10]

Im,sorry I dont understand most of it :/ I dont know arabic

They r transliterrated... I'm sorry u couldn't read it....

 

[knowitall10]

Raweeha this thread is for you

 

[AlishaK]

That was actually really really really good ! Loved the way you were able to express the beginning. Awesome ^^

Thanks.! Your appreciation is much appreciated! :')

 

[AlishaK]

okay wow man you can really write ._. like the details were really high class . it reminded me of someone, i dont know, but really i wana see a longer version of your work too!

Shukran! I mean thank you. I'm glad to know, really. Ohkay.. I'm so happy...thanks. :')
Stay blessed.
Cheers

 

[AlishaK]

I wrote it in high school! :')
Esme

 

[Lorenzo]

Right so here is one I wrote like two years ago... its a little weird and different, but nothing great. I also wrote it in the present tense which was hard to do but I wanted to see if it had an effect on the story telling so tell me how that worked out too ^^

 

[Lorenzo]

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I wrote it in high school! :')
Esme

Haha thats good ! Just curious was the structure for any particular reason... like to make an effect and planned or was it just random ?

 

[AlishaK]

Haha thats good ! Just curious was the structure for any particular reason... like to make an effect and planned or was it just random ?

it was for my friends, 'Lucky-11'... (11 of 'em), I was bored in the morn, so I wrote this.

 

[AlishaK]

Right so here is one I wrote like two years ago... its a little weird and different, but nothing great. I also wrote it in the present tense which was hard to do but I wanted to see if it had an effect on the story telling so tell me how that worked out too ^^

True! writing in present tense is comparatively difficult. :')

 

[AlishaK]

True! writing in present tense is comparatively difficult. :')

By the way, Quite an amazing work, really.

 

[Lorenzo]

By the way, Quite an amazing work, really.

Ah im glad ^^ tks Im writing another one atm ill post it when Im done if youve got more show them here !!

 

[AlishaK]

Ah im glad ^^ tks Im writing another one atm ill post it when Im done if youve got more show them here !!

Well, I have loads but literally scattered...like I just randomly start writing for eg: while im doing maths. So they're mostly lost, but today I've an exam so after that I'm gonna upload whatever i can.
Cheeers!
P.S: thanks for the thread.

 

[AlishaK]

Ah im glad ^^ tks Im writing another one atm ill post it when Im done if youve got more show them here !!

is ur story something like, u've had an accident and that man who's gon' die is someone frm ur family?!

 

[Lorenzo]

is ur story something like, u've had an accident and that man who's gon' die is someone frm ur family?!

Haha no no. Its kinda of complicated to understand. The title 'delirus' is latin for Insanity... so that should help you understand most of the story now ^^

 

[Lorenzo]

Well, I have loads but literally scattered...like I just randomly start writing for eg: while im doing maths. So they're mostly lost, but today I've an exam so after that I'm gonna upload whatever i can.
Cheeers!
P.S: thanks for the thread.

Awesome, and my pleasure haha ^^

 

[AlishaK]

Haha no no. Its kinda of complicated to understand. The title 'delirus' is latin for Insanity... so that should help you understand most of the story now ^^

Oh ! i was just thinking of googling 'delirus' haha...thanks for the latin info.
Cheers mate.

 

[E.H Jane]

Hey guys. I was wondering if any of you had written any stories or stuff like that... I wouldn't mind reading them and giving you a comment or something, so everyone can improve and stuff ( and because I like reading them too of course. I find shorter ones more interesting, especially ones with a twist, rather than long novels... even some novels are really good )

Waiting to see your stories

I write ^_^
I usually post the unedited version here.
http://www.wattpad.com/user/iChocoholic

 

[AlishaK]

I write ^_^
I usually post the uneited version here.
http://www.wattpad.com/user/iChocoholic

Naice work!

 

[E.H Jane]

Naice work!

thankyou ^_^