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Ambitious Writers

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I m a sinner, d advanced kind,
Defying d Covenant(in sm way), dat, b4 birth, i signed...

Blemished, Bruised, scarred, I now realize
The magnitude of my deeds, my sins, their size.

Constant reminders plus five prayers a day,
So I refuse to, under the weight of the world, fray..

My Lord, the Giver of Victory to all,
Thee, Rabbi, You I call...

An arrogant soul I wish mine to bring down
Before You, my Master, please delete my frown...

My head hangs in shame, I bow solely to Thee,
From the burden of my crimes, PLEASE SET ME FREE... :'(

Zari 2345qwer InDiviDuaLisT N.M Happy Muslimah 7th heaven ;) cyclone94 sumaiyarox:) Al-Anoud Student of the year Emma13 E.H Jane
I ask whoever reads this 2 plz pray 4 ALL MUSLIMS n dat Allah mks us all pious servants in dedication. aameen

awesome!!(y)
 
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I haven't written poetry in literally years, but I guess knowitall10's turned that around!
Just so you know, this was originally written in fluorescent pink ink on the blank page on a Chemistry Paper 1, finished at 3:25 am and is yet untitled. Please do not judge :p

I love an endless phone call and the pain that it releases,
I love how she understands me and puts together all my pieces.

I love how she transforms me, oh so perfectly,
From the girl I am right now to the girl I want to be.

I love our stupid moments and how they always make us laugh,
I love how she completes my sentences and even thinks on my behalf.

I love our little differences -- each one is crystal clear,
I love how they bring us closer, not far as much as near.

I love her personality, and how she has a heart of gold
I love how, when she speaks, it's like a story being told.

I love how people ask us: are you sisters? Are you twins?
And I love how we play along sometimes, which is where our story begins.

I haven't known this girl very long, not even a couple of years,
But together we've through enough exams, long hugs and bitter tears.

I could go on and on and on and on, without running out of words to say,
But just please believe that you are beautiful, and please always stay that way.

I know it's not a lot and the quality of my writing is much, much below standard, but I'd just love to give you guys the honor of reading it first. :)
Oh and don't forget -- I blog! : www.amillionreflections.wordpress.com
Good day to you all, peeps! ^^

Beautiful! =)
 
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I m a sinner, d advanced kind,
Defying d Covenant(in sm way), dat, b4 birth, i signed...

Blemished, Bruised, scarred, I now realize
The magnitude of my deeds, my sins, their size.

Constant reminders plus five prayers a day,
So I refuse to, under the weight of the world, fray..

My Lord, the Giver of Victory to all,
Thee, Rabbi, You I call...

An arrogant soul I wish mine to bring down
Before You, my Master, please delete my frown...

My head hangs in shame, I bow solely to Thee,
From the burden of my crimes, PLEASE SET ME FREE... :'(

Zari 2345qwer InDiviDuaLisT N.M Happy Muslimah 7th heaven ;) cyclone94 sumaiyarox:) Al-Anoud Student of the year Emma13 E.H Jane
I ask whoever reads this 2 plz pray 4 ALL MUSLIMS n dat Allah mks us all pious servants in dedication. aameen

Did ypu write this!!! :) It is amazing and epicccc!! :D:D If you wrote this i am amazed at your talent!! :D Pleaseeeeee post more, i wanna see them!!:D Thanks for tagging me!! :D Jazakallah!!:)
 
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I m a sinner, d advanced kind,
Defying d Covenant(in sm way), dat, b4 birth, i signed...

Blemished, Bruised, scarred, I now realize
The magnitude of my deeds, my sins, their size.

Constant reminders plus five prayers a day,
So I refuse to, under the weight of the world, fray..

My Lord, the Giver of Victory to all,
Thee, Rabbi, You I call...

An arrogant soul I wish mine to bring down
Before You, my Master, please delete my frown...

My head hangs in shame, I bow solely to Thee,
From the burden of my crimes, PLEASE SET ME FREE... :'(

Zari 2345qwer InDiviDuaLisT N.M Happy Muslimah 7th heaven ;) cyclone94 sumaiyarox:) Al-Anoud Student of the year Emma13 E.H Jane

I ask whoever reads this 2 plz pray 4 ALL MUSLIMS n dat Allah mks us all pious servants in dedication. aameen

I am seriously impressed, ma shaa Allah! This is very powerful!
 

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The Minion
That day, when you suddenly disappeared,
you had made me so tense...i was searching for you,
worse: your owner's status had pretty much cleared
the fact that you were, indeed, not true...
I was wondering if your owner was also a part of the cruel world,
because he could not see your absence in the large room,
it was a sad, strange feeling, something that had never occurred,
and i had finally realized, that your cute acts won't return too soon...
But then, your cousin took your place,
of coarse, he could not replace you,
I was glad, this morning, when i finally saw your grumpy round face,
because your absence not only ceased my smile...but many others' too..
I will always love you, little minion,
and i speak on behalf of everyone at that,
so many of you exist, maybe millions,
but what makes you unique, is your signature giggle-your laugh:)
Keep Smiling!!​
-knowitall10-​
-Sunday, 9th June 2013-​
I'm sorry guys...my minion obsession may sound sort of strange
:p


Raweeha
Nibz
1995@10Sept
all the minion lovers :LOL:
 
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