Ambitious Writers

[biba]

Thank you soo much dear! :') amen!

np

 

[InDiviDuaLisT]

knowitall10
MashaAllah!!! I cant tell you, sis, how this poem has touched me, to the very core of my heart and soul...Subhanallah!!
Jazakillah khair for tagging me i cant tell you how honored i feel, i know its more than just a tag
And i just have to say: From the moment i stumbled on this 'home', before i even started using it, i would read the posts and it amazed me! I found a site, where evryone treated each other like their own brothers and sisters and cared for each other so sincerely and truly.the second thing that amazed me, was the fact that we're mainly muslims here, and how so many many posts would be about Islam and the stuff we face as teenage muslims etc. I found it to be such an amzaing support system for all of us!!! And when i did start slowly posting and butting in , i was welcomed with open arms into the family!!!!! I found my home, XPF is where i belong!!!

AAnsarii Jazakillah khair for tagging me beautiful words....

 

[Raweeha]

I haven't written poetry in literally years, but I guess knowitall10's turned that around!
Just so you know, this was originally written in fluorescent pink ink on the blank page on a Chemistry Paper 1, finished at 3:25 am and is yet untitled. Please do not judge

I love an endless phone call and the pain that it releases,
I love how she understands me and puts together all my pieces.

I love how she transforms me, oh so perfectly,
From the girl I am right now to the girl I want to be.

I love our stupid moments and how they always make us laugh,
I love how she completes my sentences and even thinks on my behalf.

I love our little differences -- each one is crystal clear,
I love how they bring us closer, not far as much as near.

I love her personality, and how she has a heart of gold
I love how, when she speaks, it's like a story being told.

I love how people ask us: are you sisters? Are you twins?
And I love how we play along sometimes, which is where our story begins.

I haven't known this girl very long, not even a couple of years,
But together we've through enough exams, long hugs and bitter tears.

I could go on and on and on and on, without running out of words to say,
But just please believe that you are beautiful, and please always stay that way.

I know it's not a lot and the quality of my writing is much, much below standard, but I'd just love to give you guys the honor of reading it first.
Oh and don't forget -- I blog! : www.amillionreflections.wordpress.com
Good day to you all, peeps! ^^

 

[knowitall10]

I haven't written poetry in literally years, but I guess knowitall10's turned that around!
Just so you know, this was originally written in fluorescent pink ink on the blank page on a Chemistry Paper 1, finished at 3:25 am and is yet untitled. Please do not judge

I love an endless phone call and the pain that it releases,
I love how she understands me and puts together all my pieces.

I love how she transforms me, oh so perfectly,
From the girl I am right now to the girl I want to be.

I love our stupid moments and how they always make us laugh,
I love how she completes my sentences and even thinks on my behalf.

I love our little differences -- each one is crystal clear,
I love how they bring us closer, not far as much as near.

I love her personality, and how she has a heart of gold
I love how, when she speaks, it's like a story being told.

I love how people ask us: are you sisters? Are you twins?
And I love how we play along sometimes, which is where our story begins.

I haven't known this girl very long, not even a couple of years,
But together we've through enough exams, long hugs and bitter tears.

I could go on and on and on and on, without running out of words to say,
But just please believe that you are beautiful, and please always stay that way.

I know it's not a lot and the quality of my writing is much, much below standard, but I'd just love to give you guys the honor of reading it first.
Oh and don't forget -- I blog! : www.amillionreflections.wordpress.com
Good day to you all, peeps! ^^

Raweeha....this is....beautiful!!!!! And you say you ddnt write in years?? MashAllah!! Look at the talent shine here!! If i had more time to stay..i would jump through my very screen and give you a huge hug! =') YOu left me speechles...*sniff*
Thank you so much Rawee...thank you very very much...
Jazakillahu Khair!!!MAy Allah reward you..a lot!!!

 

[Student of the year]

AAnsarii Jazakillah khair dear for tagging me loved ur poem & this thread too.........
Jazakillah once again......
& May Allah bless u......!!!

 

[Student of the year]

As salaamu alaikum guys............
ur poems are just too good,& so r u`ll,
Im sorry I couldn`t reply earlier, Iwas in tears & just couldn`t get words.......

MashaAllah, may Allah guide all of us & reunite us in Jannatul firdaus......Ameen.
I would love to meet everyone of u`ll......
love u all for d sake of Allah......!!

i love poems ........specially those that i cam relate to my ownself
& was Alhamdulillah able to do that with all the poems here......
but i am unable too write nice ones myself..........

& knowitall10 ur poem

The Masked Dreams...​

was epic have no words for that..............that explains the state i had been through sometime ago...........
Love u dear....love u loads........ & *hugs*

plz pray for me guys........
i need to improve so much to just be somewhere equal to what u`ll r...........need ur duas.....plz pray.....!!

 

[knowitall10]

As salaamu alaikum guys............
ur poems are just too good,& so r u`ll,
Im sorry I couldn`t reply earlier, Iwas in tears & just couldn`t get words.......

MashaAllah, may Allah guide all of us & reunite us in Jannatul firdaus......Ameen.
I would love to meet everyone of u`ll......
love u all for d sake of Allah......!!

i love poems ........specially those that i cam relate to my ownself
& was Alhamdulillah able to do that with all the poems here......
but i am unable too write nice ones myself..........

& knowitall10 ur poem


was epic have no words for that..............that explains the state i had been through sometime ago...........
Love u dear....love u loads........ & *hugs*

plz pray for me guys........
i need to improve so much to just be somewhere equal to what u`ll r...........need ur duas.....plz pray.....!!

Al7amdulillah!
May He, for Whose Sake u love us, love you
Wa iyyakum...and please, you're praising me too much...i'm probably at a much lower level than you..of course i'm going to pray for you, dear..but i'll pray that you improve to the level of guiding us, leading us..and joining all of us in Jannah inshAllah...
May Allah Reward you...I'm glad i could relate to your life, sister...the sole reason of posting my poems here is for my brothers and sisters to learn from what i had gone through..cz my poems are my feelings...and the outcome: the solution to my problems...please keep us in your prayers as well..Jazakillahu Khair for being such an amazing support..
I salute you...

 

[Student of the year]

Al7amdulillah!
May He, for Whose Sake u love us, love you
Wa iyyakum...and please, you're praising me too much...i'm probably at a much lower level than you..of course i'm going to pray for you, dear..but i'll pray that you improve to the level of guiding us, leading us..and joining all of us in Jannah inshAllah...
May Allah Reward you...I'm glad i could relate to your life, sister...the sole reason of posting my poems here is for my brothers and sisters to learn from what i had gone through..cz my poems are my feelings...and the outcome: the solution to my problems...please keep us in your prayers as well..Jazakillahu Khair for being such an amazing support..
I salute you...

Ameen dear to all ur duas.......
Rabbana taqabbal mina......!!
not to mention sis, will have all of u`ll in my prayers, InshaAllah..


plz see d convo knowitall10 ...

 

[knowitall10]

Ameen dear to all ur duas.......
Rabbana taqabbal mina......!!
not to mention sis, will have all of u`ll in my prayers, InshaAllah..


plz see d convo knowitall10 ...

I have seen it JAzakillahu Khair dear...

 

[geek101]

Raweeha that was AMAZING mashaAllah!!

 

[Tkp]

heres a 1 by me.
friends were are
friends we'll be
friend for ever you and me

friends friends friends

friends with cars
friends from mars
friends to watch all the stars

friends friends friends

friends who trust
friends who cus
friends who always fus

friends friends friends

friends that cry
friends wonder why
friends who just want to try


friends friends friends

friends here
friends there
friends are every were

friends friends friends

friends who kiss
friends who miss
friends just like this

friends friends friends
i dnt knw its good or not

 

[Tkp]

Love is not a thing to understand
Love is not a thing to feel
Love is not a thing to give and receive
Love is a thing only to become and eternally be

 

[Tkp]

She taught me two things,
‘Ignorance and Beautiful.'

One day, she told me,

'Let me tell you,
The meaning of Beautiful.
God is beautiful,
Nature is beautiful,
Life is beautiful,
Love is beautiful,
Care is beautiful,
Share is beautiful,
Understanding is beautiful,
Trust is beautiful,
Faith is beautiful,
Passion is beautiful,
Compassion is beautiful,
Air is beautiful,
Water is beautiful,
Earth is beautiful,
Fire is beautiful,
Energy is beautiful,
Here is beautiful,
There is beautiful,
Everywhere is beautiful,
Everyone is beautiful,
Everything is beautiful.'

I had to intervene,
'Looks the universe is beautiful,
But what is most beautiful? '
The reply comes full and straight,
'Ignorance is awesomely beautiful.'

 

[Tkp]

My story when i was a kid
At the time, I was a five-year old boy
A visit to my aunty, always a joy
My cousin was playing with cars at the back
He just had a new one, the body in black
Orange lines on the side, oh boy, what a toy

Only a few minutes later, it is hard to believe
My cousin was called and he had to leave
This left us alone, that beautiful car, and me
The temptation was great, as great as could be,
I could not resist and became a thieve

Into my pocket, very smoothly it went,
I was delighted, extremely content
When we reached home, I told to my mom
With much pride about what I had done
And that's where contentment would end

My mother, incredibly sweet, incredibly bright
Swallowed her anger but asked in a voice, slightly tight
Please consider for a minute or two
How you would feel if someone did this to you.
Deep in my mind, I considered this plight.

It was easy to see the horrible feeling
I'd caused in my cousin by carelessly stealing
Our next visit, I was allowed to put it silently back
That car, with orange stripes on a body of black
Since then, I ‘ve quit forever the stealing

I don't think that there ever could be
A more brilliant lesson in empathy

 

[Tkp]

and i Love you Mom for guiding me always the right path.love u mom

 

[VelaneDeBeaute]

I haven't written poetry in literally years, but I guess knowitall10's turned that around!
Just so you know, this was originally written in fluorescent pink ink on the blank page on a Chemistry Paper 1, finished at 3:25 am and is yet untitled. Please do not judge

I love an endless phone call and the pain that it releases,
I love how she understands me and puts together all my pieces.

I love how she transforms me, oh so perfectly,
From the girl I am right now to the girl I want to be.

I love our stupid moments and how they always make us laugh,
I love how she completes my sentences and even thinks on my behalf.

I love our little differences -- each one is crystal clear,
I love how they bring us closer, not far as much as near.

I love her personality, and how she has a heart of gold
I love how, when she speaks, it's like a story being told.

I love how people ask us: are you sisters? Are you twins?
And I love how we play along sometimes, which is where our story begins.

I haven't known this girl very long, not even a couple of years,
But together we've through enough exams, long hugs and bitter tears.

I could go on and on and on and on, without running out of words to say,
But just please believe that you are beautiful, and please always stay that way.

I know it's not a lot and the quality of my writing is much, much below standard, but I'd just love to give you guys the honor of reading it first.
Oh and don't forget -- I blog! : www.amillionreflections.wordpress.com
Good day to you all, peeps! ^^

Raweeha This is so beautiful! :')
@Gemeaux You think it fits us?

 

[AAnsarii]

MashAllah tabarakAllah!! Epic...epic epic epic...1995@10Sept wa right then huh...
You need to post your poems up, Sister..I love poetry...especially when I can place myself in the poets shoes...and you're the type who writes poetry exactly the way I'd love to print out and stick on my wall..MashAllah..and InshAllah, I'll pray for you and all of the Muslimoon in our world

ma shaa Allahu la quwwata illa billah
i'm pleased dat Allah Helped me benifit you may Allah purify our hearts 4m pride n r actions 4m show-off.... :'(
u cn print it if u want

 

[Al-Anoud]

I m a sinner, d advanced kind,
Defying d Covenant(in sm way), dat, b4 birth, i signed...

Blemished, Bruised, scarred, I now realize
The magnitude of my deeds, my sins, their size.

Constant reminders plus five prayers a day,
So I refuse to, under the weight of the world, fray..

My Lord, the Giver of Victory to all,
Thee, Rabbi, You I call...

An arrogant soul I wish mine to bring down
Before You, my Master, please delete my frown...

My head hangs in shame, I bow solely to Thee,
From the burden of my crimes, PLEASE SET ME FREE... :'(

Zari 2345qwer InDiviDuaLisT N.M Happy Muslimah 7th heaven ;) cyclone94 sumaiyarox:) Al-Anoud Student of the year Emma13 E.H Jane
I ask whoever reads this 2 plz pray 4 ALL MUSLIMS n dat Allah mks us all pious servants in dedication. aameen

Ameen!
InshAllah! its beautiful!

 

[Raweeha]

Raweeha This is so beautiful! :')
@Gemeaux You think it fits us?

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it
Tag your friend there again!

 

[AAnsarii]

As salaamu alaikum guys............
ur poems are just too good,& so r u`ll,
Im sorry I couldn`t reply earlier, Iwas in tears & just couldn`t get words.......

MashaAllah, may Allah guide all of us & reunite us in Jannatul firdaus......Ameen.
I would love to meet everyone of u`ll......
love u all for d sake of Allah......!!

i love poems ........specially those that i cam relate to my ownself
& was Alhamdulillah able to do that with all the poems here......
but i am unable too write nice ones myself..........

& knowitall10 ur poem

was epic have no words for that..............that explains the state i had been through sometime ago...........
Love u dear....love u loads........ & *hugs*

plz pray for me guys........
i need to improve so much to just be somewhere equal to what u`ll r...........need ur duas.....plz pray.....!!

waks wr wb
v'r nothing but humble slaves of Allah, fuqaraa in front of The One Free of needs...n probably lower in goodness compared to you... May Allah Purify us... :'(
will inshaaAllah pray for you, n u for us, plz...