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Raweeha

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Hmm, Bilal Khan, you've exaggerated an everyday situation to something very dramatic, was that intentional? Maybe that's how you see a child viewing it. Interesting. I like your choice of words. I can personally relate to losing the handbag as I've currently misplaced something very important myself! :eek: nonetheless keep writing, you'll improve with constructive feedback and time. Oh and. It's okay to use simple words sometimes :)
 
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Raweeha said:
Hmm, Bilal Khan, you've exaggerated an everyday situation to something very dramatic, was that intentional? Maybe that's how you see a child viewing it. Interesting. I like your choice of words. I can personally relate to losing the handbag as I've currently misplaced something very important myself! :eek: nonetheless keep writing, you'll improve with constructive feedback and time. Oh and. It's okay to use simple words sometimes :)
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yes , that was intentional.. from a 6 year kid's view , it seemed like this.. :)
yeah , u are right also .. :)
 
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