help in o levels pakistan studies paper 1!ALL STUDENTS AND A* holders!!!

[asadalam]

can anyone mark this :
Q:what were the reasons for the decline of the mughal empire? [7]:
A:
there were a number of reasons for the decline of the mughal empire namely the nature of the empire, the cosequences of success and the arrival of the british.
Firstly, the nature of the empire was such that it was difficult to administer as it was very large. taxes were high and aurengzebs polices such as jizya brought many revolts. these wars cost alot of money and it was nearly emptied due to the wars of succession this weakend the empire and led to its decline
Secondly, due to success they became relaxed and complacent, the empire was not governed properly, there was corruption and huge sums of money was spent to make extravagant palaces. soon the military experties too declined and the mughals became ineffective in wars due to which the lost territory. this loss of power and the complacencies led to their decline
Finally, it was the british who pushed them into the final decline. overall they were superior in every department than the mughals. they had better weaponary and were technologically much more advanced and with the dividing mughal empire it was easy for them to take over the land as they were at the time the most powerfull nation in the world. these British strengths combined with the mughal weaknesses led them to their final decline.these are the reasons why the mughals declined.

omit the first and last lines.Other than that it's fine and you linked all of them good except i think the first para linking was a bit strange.No proper explanation was given,

5 or at best 6/7

 

[princess Anu]

please explain how arrival of british caused the decline of mughals?

 

[syed Ahsan]

Write an account of the ways in which the Qur’an was revealed to the Prophet between
the years 610 and 632.
plz help...........
plz plz..............help

 

[Deaddeamon]

omit the first and last lines.Other than that it's fine and you linked all of them good except i think the first para linking was a bit strange.No proper explanation was given,

5 or at best 6/7

so how do i improve it and do we just kick start the answer without an intro?

 

[asadalam]

so how do i improve it and do we just kick start the answer without an intro?

In 7 marks always direct start,no intro.But in 14 intro should be given.

 

[Deaddeamon]

In 7 marks always direct start,no intro.But in 14 intro should be given.

and how do i improve the answer?

 

[Tuba noor]

u should huv to add linking sentences add the end of each reason in both 7 nd 14 mark qustnx!

 

[Deaddeamon]

i

u should huv to add linking sentences add the end of each reason in both 7 nd 14 mark qustnx!

so how exactly do i link them

 

[Tuba noor]

for e.g : "thus this reason led to mughal empire decline."
u can these type of linking sentences!!!!

 

[Deaddeamon]

for e.g : "thus this reason led to mughal empire decline."
u can these type of linking sentences!!!!

i did link them like that the first one is a little unclear any other tips on how to get 7/7?

 

[Tuba noor]

u should not use too much difficult language as examiner will huv this impression that ye banda tou zaida eng jar raha ha!!!

 

[Tuba noor]

use simple language but not too much simple!

 

[Deaddeamon]

will that earn me marks????

 

[Tuba noor]

ya!

 

[Enferno]

Write an account of the ways in which the Qur’an was revealed to the Prophet between
the years 610 and 632.
plz help...........
plz plz..............help

You should have posted it in this thread: Pakistan Studies,Islamiyat and Urdu: post your doubts here
Any way, here's how to answer:
Paragraph#1 Introduction
Paragraph#2 Process of Revelation
Paragraph#3 Methods of Revelation
Paragraph#4 Division of Revelation
Explain each paragraph and write relevant references of Quran and Hadis.

 

[Deaddeamon]

omit the first and last lines.Other than that it's fine and you linked all of them good except i think the first para linking was a bit strange.No proper explanation was given,

5 or at best 6/7

any suggestion to get 7/7?

 

[asadalam]

Actually i think it's already 6/7

If u do what i said ,it would give a better impression.So 7/7

 

[princess Anu]

Actually i think it's already 6/7

If u do what i said ,it would give a better impression.So 7/7

can u please tell me are these topics included in 2013 syllabus of islamist?
Mairaj, rights of orphans non muslims women as daughter.. jihaad?

 

[Tuba noor]

ya these topics r included!

 

[Deaddeamon]

is it 100% assured that the 1st three questions will be from section 1 and 2 i am a little worried.