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SAVE ME FROM MYSELF

Without a word I’m left

Quiet and alone, in these four walls

Squared and despaired

The words I don’t speak,

The words I can’t speak, Stay inside in an ocean

An ocean that drowns me, Each n everyday

I struggle to stay up, above its waves

Sometimes I do, Sometimes I don’t

Fall to its bed, hit my head, on a stone of memories

Bubbles of tears escape my eyes,

Hug myself tight, Wish to be held



Stay there for a while, till I’m done with myself

Come right up on to the surface,

A fake smile on my face, “everything alright”, Everybody figures

They don’t know whats inside

An ocean of despair,

Drowns me everyday

Or once in a while

I struggle to breathe

A constant state of mind

Struggle to be myself.

Sometimes I’m lost nowhere to be found

Sometimes I die, so many times from the inside

Nobody saves me, Nobody can save me

Who can save me….from myself?

Taken from :https://lifeconfusions.wordpress.com/
 
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Midnight dream said:
Karta Kuch karar Is dil ka, Hota agar ikhtiyar
Ankhain bhi hain Num Fareb-e-Mohabbat main...( Myself)
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Midnight dream said:
Karta Kuch karar Is dil ka, Hota agar ikhtiyar
Ankhain bhi hain Num Fareb-e-Mohabbat main...( Myself)
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TUM KIA CHEEZE HO ? :eek::cool::giggle::love::X3:
That was just the epitome of perfection!WOW!Perfect words,right place.

Haqeeqatan ye tumharay tajarbaat,ahsasaat kay bohat hee umda nechoor hai. Masha Allah!

<Just one small thing wont it correct if you write Karta Kuch karar ye dil?>
 
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TUM KIA CHEEZE HO ? :eek::cool::giggle::love::X3:
That was just the epitome of perfection!WOW!Perfect words,right place.

Haqeeqatan ye tumharay tajarbaat,ahsasaat kay bohat hee umda nechoor hai. Masha Allah!

<Just one small thing wont it correct if you write Karta Kuch karar ye dil?>
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AWWWWW..Thanks soo muchhh..Ab itni bhi achi nahi thi..:p :rolleyes::cry::giggle::LOL::ROFLMAO:
Nopes..it is damn far from perfection.But i rather not have perfection I love GRACE xD Adab Adab

*sigh* Yup Bohat hi close hai.Shayari tab taq nahi hoti jab tak insaan un ahsasat se na guzra ho.But Thanks.:p:)

Ohh..Thank for that..Mujhay bhi ajeeb lag raha tha woh.(y)(y)
 
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AWWWWW..Thanks soo muchhh..Ab itni bhi achi nahi thi..:p :rolleyes::cry::giggle::LOL::ROFLMAO:
Nopes..it is damn far from perfection.But i rather not have perfection I love GRACE xD Adab Adab

*sigh* Yup Bohat hi close hai.Shayari tab taq nahi hoti jab tak insaan un ahsasat se na guzra ho.But Thanks.:p:)

Ohh..Thank for that..Mujhay bhi ajeeb lag raha tha woh.(y)(y)
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Welcome :D but thank you for sharing :) Koi nahi... thee! :p
But you placed the words perfectly! XD


Well said:X3:Welcome again:rolleyes:

Welcome again...Hehe:giggle: mujhay bhi;)
 
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Midnight dream said:
Hum Sikwa bhi karain tou tujh se Kyun?
Na thi hum main koi khoobi keh tujhay pehlo main rakhtay..(Myself)

My Name Any views? Plus yeh bhi batana keh what did you get from the shair.:p Any one can share their thought.
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<shikwa*>
When you said yeh bhi batana keh what did you get from the shair...
I feel doubtful about what I actually have gotten from the shair.:p Khairz :3

Cant say what weighs more <in this> XP questioning oneself or thinking one is worthless. :rolleyes:

What I got from this shair hmmm..:giggle:

What I suppose I can say is that you started thinking right after something has happened. A part of you is blaming you!
You thought your self to be less.You made yourself think that you are worthless.You brought to yourself to a low point.
You questioned and complained but both to yourself and no other being.
One side of you demanded answers that if you gained would give you some peace and/or satisfaction but you didnt dare to ask. Because of the reason that the other side of you reminded you of your <false> limit.


You talk about how the humble yet unique you did not deserve something,though your heart yearns for it!
You are stiff on your opinion and accept it even more... that you are no bird that soars the blue sky but a small unscented bud on a small area of poor soil.

Does this make ANY SENSE? :LOL:

I might be slightly right,completely wrong or near the right track. :3
 
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<shikwa*>
When you said yeh bhi batana keh what did you get from the shair...
I feel doubtful about what I actually have gotten from the shair.:p Khairz :3

Cant say what weighs more <in this> XP questioning oneself or thinking one is worthless. :rolleyes:

What I got from this shair hmmm..:giggle:

What I suppose I can say is that you started thinking right after something has happened. A part of you is blaming you!
You thought your self to be less.You made yourself think that you are worthless.You brought to yourself to a low point.
You questioned and complained but both to yourself and no other being.
One side of you demanded answers that if you gained would give you some peace and/or satisfaction but you didnt dare to ask. Because of the reason that the other side of you reminded you of your <false> limit.


You talk about how the humble yet unique you did not deserve something,though your heart yearns for it!
You are stiff on your opinion and accept it even more... that you are no bird that soars the blue sky but a small unscented bud on a small of poor soil.

Does this make ANY SENSE? :LOL:

I might be slightly right,completely wrong or near the right track. :3
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-_- MAke sense? MAKE SENSE..OMG MN it was a BULLS EYE.XD

^__^ You know why i asked YOU to share thoughts? Because moyo chan tumhari sooch bohat hi claas ki hai..
Every word you said is true to a great extent.The way you described this shair is just tremendous.

Because of the reason that the other side of you reminded you of your <false> limit <-- exactly:p

On the Track.XD Love you.:**
 
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-_- MAke sense? MAKE SENSE..OMG MN it was a BULLS EYE.XD

^__^ You know why i asked YOU to share thoughts? Because moyo chan tumhari sooch bohat hi claas ki hai..
Every word you said is true to a great extent.The way you described this shair is just tremendous.

Because of the reason that the other side of you reminded you of your <false> limit <-- exactly:p

On the Track.XD Love you.:**
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OMG YAY! :D

Ohoo,Shairaa! :p Don't make me blush in you know what colour. :rolleyes:
Lekin original is the best!MashaAllah (y) Your two lines in front of my paras are nothing.

Im glad to hear it was. Ahh tyy ^.^

:) ^.^:X3:
Yus:cool: Awe :X3: :*Luvyaback!Keep writing.
 
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wahan gaya bhi main to unki galiyon ka kya jawab
yad thi jitni duain, sarf-e-darban ho gain

janfiza hai bara, jis k hath mein jam a gaya
sab lakirein hath ki goya rag-e-jan ho gain

ham muwahihad hain, hamara kesh hai tark-e-rusum
millatein jab mit gain, ajza-e-iman ho gain

ranj se khugar hua insan to mit jata hai ranj
mushkilein mujh par pari itni ke asan ho gain

yun hi gar rota raha 'Ghalib', to ae ahl-e-jahan
dekhna in bastiyon ko tum ki wiran ho gain
 
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