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thata the power of a talented URDU poet....no... lekin ive written this after a very long time....
waaaaahhh..... one cant get tired of listening to such verses...
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Poetry! =P
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waaaaahhh..... one cant get tired of listening to such verses...
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hahaaha.... but im serious...
my sign is general.... ur pretty observant rite...
I cant judge myself...! My impression is whatever others think about me.
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...and pretty clever.... there are very less of ur kind in the world...
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mmmmm...... sort of... so continue the topicc..
mmmmm...... sort of... so continue the topicc..
is dunya kay baashinday, hr cheez ko shakl-e-behaal kartay hen
nizaam yun hi khatam nahi hua,
yahaan log har chezz ko mehez kaar-e-zaat k liye istamaal kartay hen
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very guddd....is dunya kay baashinday, hr cheez ko shakl-e-behaal kartay hen
nizaam yun hi khatam nahi hua,
yahaan log har chezz ko mehez kaar-e-zaat k liye istamaal kartay hen
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another of my immature poetry..........
kitne arsai baad ye banda hazir horaha hai tere dar pr Ya Allah....
apni faryadein apne dukh apne gunah terai samne rakhne Ya Allah....
bohat umeed kai sath hazri lagai hai us ne kai tu maaf kr de ga aur madad kr de ga us ki Ya Allah....
aur de ga us kai dil ko sukoon aur nawaaz dega us ko apni rehmatoon se Ya Allah....
janta hai tera nafarmaan banda ke bohat nafarmaan hai wo...
chahye usko dunya take ban jaye sab ki pehchann wo...
akhirat ki kuch fikr nahi hai jante hoye bhi bekhabar hai wo,...
darr lagta hai is ko kabhi kabhi lekin phir darr nikal deta hai apne undar se wo..
pata nahi ho kya gya hai bandai terai ko ....
asa lagta hai kai sakht hogya hai dil uska sab se alag rehna chahta hai wo...
apne hi ap se wahshat honai lagti hai kabhi kabhi....
aur dil krta hai ke maut aa jaye usko jald hi....
lekin phir aik khof ajat hai dil mein uske.....
kai maut ki tamanna krna t haraam hai......
kya jawab doon ga main apnai Allah ko jab mein jaon ga dosre jahan....
jab kisi ko kisi ka hosh na hoga.....
jab hoga sab taraf holnaki aur khofnaki ka samaan....
kiye hain bohat gunna us bande nai Ya Allah....
lekin phir bhi poora bharoosa rakhta hai tuj pr Ya Allah....
bas isi bahanai wo apnai zindagi kai din kaat raha hai Ya Allah....
kai to us ki magfarat farmadai Ya Allah....
ibaadat bhi krat hai teri lekin phir bhi dil ko sukoon nahi....
kalaam bhi parta hai tera magar phir bhi dil ko itmenan nahi....
janta nahi kyun khaali khaali sa hai wo Ya Allah....
phir bhi us pr khaas karam hai tera Ya Allah....
smj nahi araha kai aagai wo kya like Ya Allah....
ho gai khatam is ke saare ilfaaz Ya Allah....
bas ek faryaad ek hi dua hai Ya Allah....
kai us pr apni rehmatoon ki baarish kr de Ya Allah....
na ki us pr ghar rehamtoon ki barsaat Ya Allah....
na maaf kya ghar usko Ya Allah....
to phir darr hai kai barabad na ho jaye wo Ya Allah....
kitne arsai baad ye banda hazir horaha hai tere dar pr Ya Allah....
apni faryadein apne dukh apne gunah terai samne rakhne Ya Allah....
bohat umeed kai sath hazri lagai hai us ne kai tu maaf kr de ga aur madad kr de ga us ki Ya Allah....
aur de ga us kai dil ko sukoon aur nawaaz dega us ko apni rehmatoon se Ya Allah....
janta hai tera nafarmaan banda ke bohat nafarmaan hai wo...
chahye usko dunya take ban jaye sab ki pehchann wo...
akhirat ki kuch fikr nahi hai jante hoye bhi bekhabar hai wo,...
darr lagta hai is ko kabhi kabhi lekin phir darr nikal deta hai apne undar se wo..
pata nahi ho kya gya hai bandai terai ko ....
asa lagta hai kai sakht hogya hai dil uska sab se alag rehna chahta hai wo...
apne hi ap se wahshat honai lagti hai kabhi kabhi....
aur dil krta hai ke maut aa jaye usko jald hi....
lekin phir aik khof ajat hai dil mein uske.....
kai maut ki tamanna krna t haraam hai......
kya jawab doon ga main apnai Allah ko jab mein jaon ga dosre jahan....
jab kisi ko kisi ka hosh na hoga.....
jab hoga sab taraf holnaki aur khofnaki ka samaan....
kiye hain bohat gunna us bande nai Ya Allah....
lekin phir bhi poora bharoosa rakhta hai tuj pr Ya Allah....
bas isi bahanai wo apnai zindagi kai din kaat raha hai Ya Allah....
kai to us ki magfarat farmadai Ya Allah....
ibaadat bhi krat hai teri lekin phir bhi dil ko sukoon nahi....
kalaam bhi parta hai tera magar phir bhi dil ko itmenan nahi....
janta nahi kyun khaali khaali sa hai wo Ya Allah....
phir bhi us pr khaas karam hai tera Ya Allah....
smj nahi araha kai aagai wo kya like Ya Allah....
ho gai khatam is ke saare ilfaaz Ya Allah....
bas ek faryaad ek hi dua hai Ya Allah....
kai us pr apni rehmatoon ki baarish kr de Ya Allah....
na ki us pr ghar rehamtoon ki barsaat Ya Allah....
na maaf kya ghar usko Ya Allah....
to phir darr hai kai barabad na ho jaye wo Ya Allah....
really good, some parts of this.I won't say that this is like you should write, just this that write in such a way that you express everything you want to deliver. Cuz some (3 or 4) of the verses here are not such that we can understand, I am talking about Idea and wording both for those verses.
Otherwise it really a good one w.r.t. inspiration
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I won't say that this is like you should write, just this that write in such a way that you express everything you want to deliver. Cuz some (3 or 4) of the verses here are not such that we can understand, I am talking about Idea and wording both for those verses.
Otherwise it really a good one w.r.t. inspiration
hahaha.... yes i know.... jazakallah for pointing out my mistakes....
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UNBELIABLY.... SUPERBBBBB......
and how is that who is pointing mistakes....
ask yourself can u write like this.,.... and stop highlighting mistakes..... plzzzzzz
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UNBELIABLY.... SUPERBBBBB......
and how is that who is pointing mistakes....
ask yourself can u write like this.,.... and stop highlighting mistakes..... plzzzzzz
hahahaha... he is seriously good.... he has that talent... i dont.... read his poetry a few pages back... they r worth reading...
hahahaha... he is seriously good.... he has that talent... i dont.... read his poetry a few pages back... they r worth reading...
thank you Aapi
I am sure if you dont stop, you can get better than me
and bro, if you need you can start reading from page 138!UNBELIABLY.... SUPERBBBBB......
and how is that who is pointing mistakes....
ask yourself can u write like this.,.... and stop highlighting mistakes..... plzzzzzz
hope you like it! Sorry I never bear anyone criticizing my poetry, specially the one which I like
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So i saw this awesome poem by a 10 year old and i got inspired to make my own
Death after it
So are you well prepared for it
if not you will burn in hell bit by bit
Slang words some people tell
In hell they will scream and yell
Do your prayer and Quran you must read
And to Paradise you might lead
Do the must
Or else you will rust
with all that thirst
Be kind
show path to the blind
All I can do it is give you advise
and after death you will rise
So are you well prepared for it
If not you will burn in hell bit by bit
By Me
Death after it
So are you well prepared for it
if not you will burn in hell bit by bit
Slang words some people tell
In hell they will scream and yell
Do your prayer and Quran you must read
And to Paradise you might lead
Do the must
Or else you will rust
with all that thirst
Be kind
show path to the blind
All I can do it is give you advise
and after death you will rise
So are you well prepared for it
If not you will burn in hell bit by bit
By Me
So i saw this awesome poem by a 10 year old and i got inspired to make my own
Death after it
So are you well prepared for it
if not you will burn in hell bit by bit
Slang words some people tell
In hell they will scream and yell
Do your prayer and Quran you must read
And to Paradise you might lead
Do the must
Or else you will rust
with all that thirst
Be kind
show path to the blind
All I can do it is give you advise
and after death you will rise
So are you well prepared for it
If not you will burn in hell bit by bit
By Me
IS THAT REALLY YOURS? ALL OF IT?
btw I am not that much good at English poetry but thats simple and SERIOUSLY LIKEABLE!
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Oh yes my dear
Cheating oh never i fear
Oh thanks i would like to write more
But i don't want you to get bore
Simple is what i try to make it
so everyone can understand it
i hope thats totally fit
I am happy its likeable
and is stable
now let me grab my pen paper and table
so i can write a poem for a label
Lol just kidding around
my poetry is not on top of the list it goes down
but i might be the best in my town
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I hope you guys don't mind me ruining the thread