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couldnt read i was having a terrible headache at that tym :/Thnx. Cuz I would not have been able to reply Taimoor on this.
Okay Okay. Next time I'll make an ergonomics version aswell. But at least tell me how the story was !!!!
give me the exact link... of the page wch consists of the story!Thnx. Cuz I would not have been able to reply Taimoor on this.
Okay Okay. Next time I'll make an ergonomics version aswell. But at least tell me how the story was !!!!
wch stry do u wanna continue... cux this is saiyans writing and u need to askhim. as for any of the topics that i give any one is free to write stries anytime
was meant to be Disturbing. You asked for Horror I gave you horror. Call me Osama or SOTZthe story is very disturbing... i think u got carried away zaidi
the story is very disturbing... i think u got carried away zaidi
ok sorry osama but wife wala part thora explicit hogia tha... :/ baki story awesome thi... bas wife ka part was lie thora kafi violent
yes u are right. There is something kind of missing. Perhaps I should have symbolised Gary's character a bit more. He grew with severe people. He had a kind of wierd personality; a kind of emotional disorder in him. He could not control himself in anger.
Thnx for pointing out. Next time it will help me to be more careful with Character symbolism and past to prevent any flaws.
it will weigh ur stry down. trust me. now i can even read normally bout a person being cut to peices. but not beaten up witha hammer. honestly i was feeling sum pain wen i read it. these things totally torture ur mind while near me the whole point of reading fiction is enjoyment... now in my mind i will think that uhave a certain way of writing and wont read ur stories next tym assuming it contains gore only if i am a reader.get thingswch ppl like, even if there is a twist... make it humanly. i dunno how to explain... your stry could have been for sme other sin... abortion again is a sensitive issue and shud not be brought into a stry wch is meant to be enjoyed. i meanit cd have been anyyyyyyyyyything in the whole wide world,, but u chose sumthing... odd. try to write bout things that ppl can relate to. that ppl enjoy
i love the cover. and yes nice sequencing its in order. lemme readmore.
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