Ambitious Writers

[usama321]

Share that one too...I'd like to read it

am kinda working on it, delayed due to the papers. Lemme pm it to you what i have written so far

 

[Lorenzo]

quote="usama321, post: 571871, member: 13534"]that's a good piece of writing I like it. Would only suggest to divide it in paragraphs, the rest is great [/quote]

I see what you mean . Thanks for the suggestion ^^

 

[knowitall10]

I contemplate on what I am…​

Everyone thinks I am a genius,​

Yes, explanations I can give and posts I can slam,​

But does that make me somewhat mysterious?​

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They think I’m smart, with a peaking IQ,​

But they don’t realize what I might be,​

I am talented at explaining, and that’s what I showed you,​

But from my explanations, what makes me seem so sharp, that’s what I can’t see…​

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I am a sinner, a Muslimah who was never pure,​

And that’s what especially ashames me,​

To my own stupidity, I can find no cure,​

I am but a confused soul, looking forward to be set free…​

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But what of my freedom, when I’m placed in Hell?​

What of my posts, when I’m not on the road to succeed?​

Ya Allah, increase this level of faith, to an extent that my heart shall swell,​

To a level where I can title my soul as "freed"..​

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Rabbana, let not these praises raise my pride,​

Let not this world be a temporary fun for me,​

Ya Allah, make me strong enough so that I don’t go and hide,​

From the people of this world, who, my real face shall see…​

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I ask You for forgiveness Ya Rahman,​

You deserve the Praise, and You Only deserve worship,​

You Are the One to guide me through Islam,​

And it’s Your Will, if that has to be done through hardship….​

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knowitall10-24th May 2013-​

 

[AlishaK]

I contemplate on what I am…​

Everyone thinks I am a genius,​

Yes, explanations I can give and posts I can slam,​

But does that make me somewhat mysterious?​

​

They think I’m smart, with a peaking IQ,​

But they don’t realize what I might be,​

I am talented at explaining, and that’s what I showed you,​

But from my explanations, what makes me seem so sharp, that’s what I can’t see…​

​

I am a sinner, a Muslimah who was never pure,​

And that’s what especially ashames me,​

To my own stupidity, I can find no cure,​

I am but a confused soul, looking forward to be set free…​

​

But what of my freedom, when I’m placed in Hell?​

What of my posts, when I’m not on the road to succeed?​

Ya Allah, increase this level of faith, to an extent that my heart shall swell,​

To a level where I can title my soul as "freed"..​

​

Rabbana, let not these praises raise my pride,​

Let not this world be a temporary fun for me,​

Ya Allah, make me strong enough so that I don’t go and hide,​

From the people of this world, who, my real face shall see…​

​

I ask You for forgiveness Ya Rahman,​

You deserve the Praise, and You Only deserve worship,​

You Are the One to guide me through Islam,​

And it’s Your Will, if that has to be done through hardship….​

​

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knowitall10-24th May 2013-​

Amazingg sistah!

 

[knowitall10]

A Treasure.​

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It was that one day I stepped in your class,​

that one day I never realized you,​

A question had I asked the teacher...about the mole ratio and mass,​

And that's when you came out of nowhere, totally out of the blue...​

​

This world doesn't lack faces,​

they make you laugh, cry, anxious and peaceful,​

they come from all of the world's places,​

but what are you, and what had made you so humble?​

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You're the one who gripped my heart,​

you're the one to guide me through,​

I don't know how to thank you, from where am I supposed to start?​

You've been there for me, whenever I needed you...​

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Ya Allah, thank You for sending her here,​

thank You for making her a part of me!​

Ya Rabbi, people like her are truly rare,​

and the outcome of patience, now do I really see....​

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Indeed, I have found the long lost treasure,​

I have found someone to pull me up and raise my self-esteem,​

I appreciate you so much, a friend like you is a huge pleasure,​

You are the real face, no mask, no background, no theme....​

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Thank you for all you've done for someone that had never deserved,​

Your awesomeness is truly, one that shines in the night,​

You're the luminescence when darkness covers the world,​

May Allah Make the bond between us ever so tight...​

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knowitall10-Monday, 27th May 2013-​

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Raweeha this is for you....​

 

[Raweeha]

knowitall10 I have tears in my eyes ... no words, seriously. I'm speechless.
Don't let any loser ever dull your sparkle, beautiful. I lovelovelove you. ♥
May Allah bring us ever closer to each other and to Himself, and may our souls be neighbors even if we're physically miles away.
I cherish your presence more than you could possibly imagine.
Never letting you go, twin sister. Ever.

 

[knowitall10]

knowitall10 I have tears in my eyes ... no words, seriously. I'm speechless.
Don't let any loser ever dull your sparkle, beautiful. I lovelovelove you. ♥
May Allah bring us ever closer to each other and to Himself, and may our souls be neighbors even if we're physically miles away.
I cherish your presence more than you could possibly imagine.
Never letting you go, twin sister. Ever.

Yesss!!!!!! Point 1 for me..i'm still not doen, ur winning this game.....i must equal you!

I love you too sis! More than you'll ever know!

 

[1995@10Sept]

knowitall10...did u write that...?? mashaAllah it's amazing

 

[knowitall10]

knowitall10...did u write that...?? mashaAllah it's amazing

yes i did Thank you

 

[1995@10Sept]

yes i did Thank you

Welcome
Read ur speech too... Ur an amazing writer mashaAllah

 

[knowitall10]

Welcome
Read ur speech too... Ur an amazing writer mashaAllah

Thank you...ur making me so shy now!!!

 

[1995@10Sept]

Thank you...ur making me so shy now!!!

Ur welcome....hahaha...
But thanks to Raweeha .. she posted it on ur wall n i saw the link...n that's how i found out ur Beautiful wrk mashaAllah....

 

[Lorenzo]

Hey guys Ive been working on this for a while and Ive just finished the first part. Id really appreciate it if you read it and left a like or two xD Also id love any comments, good or bad and any suggestions

www.wattpad.com/story/5922828-the-river-of-consciousness-part-1

Ambitious Writer Lorenzo

 

[knowitall10]

Ur welcome....hahaha...
But thanks to Raweeha .. she posted it on ur wall n i saw the link...n that's how i found out ur Beautiful wrk mashaAllah....

oh god... i love her!!

 

[sumaiyarox:)]

A Treasure.​

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It was that one day I stepped in your class,​

that one day I never realized you,​

A question had I asked the teacher...about the mole ratio and mass,​

And that's when you came out of nowhere, totally out of the blue...​

​

This world doesn't lack faces,​

they make you laugh, cry, anxious and peaceful,​

they come from all of the world's places,​

but what are you, and what had made you so humble?​

​

You're the one who gripped my heart,​

you're the one to guide me through,​

I don't know how to thank you, from where am I supposed to start?​

You've been there for me, whenever I needed you...​

​

Ya Allah, thank You for sending her here,​

thank You for making her a part of me!​

Ya Rabbi, people like her are truly rare,​

and the outcome of patience, now do I really see....​

​

Indeed, I have found the long lost treasure,​

I have found someone to pull me up and raise my self-esteem,​

I appreciate you so much, a friend like you is a huge pleasure,​

You are the real face, no mask, no background, no theme....​

​

Thank you for all you've done for someone that had never deserved,​

Your awesomeness is truly, one that shines in the night,​

You're the luminescence when darkness covers the world,​

May Allah Make the bond between us ever so tight...​

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knowitall10-Monday, 27th May 2013-​

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Raweeha this is for you....​

this is awesome!!

 

[knowitall10]

this is awesome!!

Thanks a lot....

 

[Lorenzo]

Haha hey guys :') Sorry if I spam you with my stories... but after all thats what the thread is for. So yeah Ive finished the second part of The River Of Consdciousness. And i'd love it if you read it and then gave me some feed back. Thanks

http://www.wattpad.com/story/5922828-the-river-of-consciousness

 

[Raweeha]

Haha hey guys :') Sorry if I spam you with my stories... but after all thats what the thread is for. So yeah Ive finished the second part of The River Of Consdciousness. And i'd love it if you read it and then gave me some feed back. Thanks

http://www.wattpad.com/story/5922828-the-river-of-consciousness

I actually loved the first part ... will be sure to read this one too. Keep writing

 

[Lorenzo]

I actually loved the first part ... will be sure to read this one too. Keep writing

Thanks

 

[knowitall10]

A REALIZATION......​

I am a writer, reader and poet,​

an artist, a thinker, and an athlete,​

I interpret my world the way I know it,​

it's so full of blessings..yet incomplete...​

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I have friends, a family and a status,​

but there's an empty feeling within me....what's missing?​

It's the realization that hit me when I was Faithless,​

a realization so painful..it would sting!​

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I was reciting the Holy Qur'an that day,​

a routine that I carelessly follow before I study,​

I read a common verse...that we're all made of clay,​

and that made it clear: how worthless are we?​

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The Dwellers of Jannah will be thanking the Most High,​

and will be assured of a life that is trial-free,​

But the Dwellers of Jahanum will scream and cry,​

They'll be begging for forgiveness....Says the All-Mighty...​

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They are those who had engaged in Al-Laghw:​

The falsehood, evil and the sinful talk!​

The ones who had broken promises and were never true..​

the ones who joked about Rasool...the ones who had continuously mocked!​

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This Surah had struck me immensely like never before,​

I took it as a warning for me..and all of us,​

so let's enjoin good and forbid evil...and spread the Word more!​

so that on the Judgment Day..we enter the Gates of Jannah and are greeted with Salam!​

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Rabbana..we thank You grossly for sending this Book wholly,​

we thank You, and always will, for gifting us this Blessing- the Iman!​

Ya Allah! Make this Ummah as white and clear of purity,​

and Ya Noor-us-Samawati wa Al-Ardh! Make the Noor of the our dark​

hearts..the Qur'an...​

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-Aameen--​

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By: knowitall10- 2nd June 2013.​

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Note..Brothers and Sistes..I strongly suggest that you take out 15 minutes of your time..and recite Surah Al-Fatir out loud..and fpr those of us who are not Arabs and do not understand much of Arabic: read it with it's translation...it's beautiful, just like all other Surah's in the Qur'an..​

Please keep me in your prayers..​