Ambitious Writers

[usama321]

But I didn't write any story...mine's a poem

oops i mixed your avatar with someone else :O the story on the first page, i thought it was yours

 

[knowitall10]

oops i mixed your avatar with someone else :O the story on the first page, i thought it was yours

Never mind! It's alright brother

 

[flaminheroes]

I’m laying in the bed,
thinking of the last time I made a mistake
The clock struck midnight and I’m dreaming again,
‘I’m running down the stairs, I trip and fall,
a dark shadow standing behind me like a pitfall,
I try to stand back, but someone holds my hand…
As I turn back…’
It’s morning again.
the alarm’s screamin’, insane
and that touch remains a mystery, a pain.
I’ve been through the darkness of the light,
Fell so bad from such a height,
You laughed at me, tried to invade me,
But I love it baby, and now u’ll see what I used to be
Hey! Hello! Are u talking to me?
Remember the first time we met,
U said I was a freak,
But wait haha, what do u mean?
Just cause I’ vent got a Ferrari, is that what u see?
I’m trying to overcome these forces
I’m sick and tired of making messes.
I aint no Tony Stark, owning a weapons-industry
I can’t even use a gun, yet they call him ‘iron man’ and me ‘terrorist’?
Mama told me, go and chase what u want
But I aint no millionaire, I gotta play it hard
And now im here, fighting with my siblings in the backyard
Shit! This can’t be real, I broke my bruv’s arm.
You haters look at me,
Like im a spinning coin,
I spend everyday, so lazy,
Like im on Heroin
Deep inside are buried the cruel secrets of my life
They can’t tell from my face if I’ll be able to fight
‘Cause even Batman wears a mask until you realize
It’s Bruce Wayne in a suit o f a knight!
When the dark force rises
The sun goes and hide,
Until the right time arrives
then the light stabs the evil with a knife!
Brandy skinny stretched up,
I get outa my chevy,
They say check out that chick, She’s got a cool ride
Now what u say baby?
I thought u said im nothing?
Haha, but when u’re done hating,
Dial 999, call my home, I’ll be waiting!

Written By Komal Azam aka AlishaK

I just randomly wrote now. flaminheroes Esme
On your Request. Not my best thou.
Cheers!

Mother of great writings. This is just pure iasisfnfiuafiusdifusdgukjfdnd

 

[knowitall10]

Mother of great writings. This is just pure iasisfnfiuafiusdifusdgukjfdnd

LOL!!!! What the heck was that? XD

 

[flaminheroes]

The Laptop fell while i was writing that lol (i'm kidding, i just started banging on my keyboard to express how awesome that writing was.)

 

[Lorenzo]

Its awesome. =)

thanks

 

[knowitall10]

The Laptop fell while i was writing that lol (i'm kidding, i just started banging on my keyboard to express how awesome that writing was.)

You're psycho!

 

[Esme]

oops i mixed your avatar with someone else :O the story on the first page, i thought it was yours

You write too, don't you? Why don't you share your stuff here ?

 

[AlishaK]

Mother of great writings. This is just pure iasisfnfiuafiusdifusdgukjfdnd

LOL! U do mean it eh?! Anyhow, kalsjkhdnkjlfhkaghkjs;hnlkdgjm
P.S: I mean 'thank you so much' in 'mess' language' which u re quite aware of . :')

 

[AlishaK]

This is beautiful. I could see my username innit!

ahhaha....thanks, that's my friends' nicky. thanks anyway!

 

[AlishaK]

Well was just going through the past posts. Seems like a lot of people like writing here

downloaded your story and realised i don't have microsoft word. the woes of reinstalling OS.

http://www.wattpad.com/17465685-unreal-description#.UZ6IFDdQ-H8, I want you to read this! I dont know if u were referring to me abt the ms doc. But whatever u r such a good writer and i want you to tell me/guide me too. Ur opinions matter. And even thou i did not read the whole thing, i deffo will when i get time cause i know it'll be great!! DDDDD
Cheers!
Jazak Allah khair.

 

[usama321]

http://www.wattpad.com/17465685-unreal-description#.UZ6IFDdQ-H8, I want you to read this! I dont know if u were referring to me abt the ms doc. But whatever u r such a good writer and i want you to tell me/guide me too. Ur opinions matter. And even thou i did not read the whole thing, i deffo will when i get time cause i know it'll be great!! DDDDD
Cheers!
Jazak Allah khair.

thanks well i went through it, and i liked the tone of the first few lines. But the "ummmm okay" part and after it kinda tinted the whole air. You were writing in a majestic way, it would have sounded better if you had continued on like that. Maybe you should tell that part at the end, beneath your signature or something like that, just so that the reader knows what is the general theme of the story. I'd like to read the story though

You write too, don't you? Why don't you share your stuff here ?

I can think so many plots but when it comes to writing them down, i loose all will of doing any such thing. Still, i have something to share. It is a creation myth, which i abandoned cuz i did not like it very much. (working on another one now ) Do read it if anyone gets the time

http://storywrite.com/story/10120277-Of_the_Heavens-by-Fantasymaniac

 

[AlishaK]

thanks well i went through it, and i liked the tone of the first few lines. But the "ummmm okay" part and after it kinda tinted the whole air. You were writing in a majestic way, it would have sounded better if you had continued on like that. Maybe you should tell that part at the end, beneath your signature or something like that, just so that the reader knows what is the general theme of the story. I'd like to read the story though


I can think so many plots but when it comes to writing them down, i loose all will of doing any such thing. Still, i have something to share. It is a creation myth, which i abandoned cuz i did not like it very much. (working on another one now ) Do read it if anyone gets the time

http://storywrite.com/story/10120277-Of_the_Heavens-by-Fantasymaniac

Thanks, cheers!

 

[AlishaK]

I-time, I-tune, I-freak,
I go to a bash and ‘em people looking at me
I-drive, I-drift, I-speed,
My car’s parked in the garage, it got a silvery sheen

I’m like a massive thunder,
I always make ‘em wonder,
I’m K, double A,
Don’t be confused, it ain’t no brand name

I got Gucci and Prada in my wardrobe,
Bought it last night from a shop that I robbed
Got a chain wrapped around my neck with a $ pendent hooked,
I make ‘em all believe that I belong to the YMCMB group.

I’m like a G-6, so fast, so sleek,
I’m the popularity of direction boys and Justin,
I gotta bank of passports, I go wherever I feel like,
I’m the terror of your dreams, I can make you feel right

I’m a need-for-speed game,
I ain’t no free game
You can play me on wii and X-box,
Or PS3, ‘cause I please Fame!

I was bored a few minutes ago. Sick enough flaminheroes
Esme gary221 .... :')

 

[AlishaK]

I wrote this when i was upset cause of one of my best friends, I found this so thought to share. :')
I’ve left behind,
The relationships I thought were mine,
Cause they were all the same,
Mean they were, hurt me all the way

Sometimes it’s hard,
To control your heart,
But sometimes it speaks,
For the inner truth it seems,

My loneliness shouts out loud,
Can someone hear me in that noise?
Are you all too busy or proud
Cause every time I scream there’s no one to hear my voice,

Did you notice me from the depths
Did you ever see the tears in those curving smiles
Now I ain’t gonna give away the part of me that’s left
But surely gonna go far away, maybe miles

Feel my heart beat, it is high and slowing down,
Like a far away waterfall near a hidden town,
Save me before I lose it all,
Make me stronger with your love!

 

[Esme]

I can think so many plots but when it comes to writing them down, i loose all will of doing any such thing. Still, i have something to share. It is a creation myth, which i abandoned cuz i did not like it very much. (working on another one now ) Do read it if anyone gets the time

http://storywrite.com/story/10120277-Of_the_Heavens-by-Fantasymaniac

Wow!! I only read the first 6 paragraphs..haven't got time right now but you're really really very good. It doesn't look like it's been written by an amateur!! I like your style of writing and you've got a creative imagination! I seriously mean it!
And if I'm not wrong, Tolkein inspired you to write this ?

 

[usama321]

Wow!! I only read the first 6 paragraphs..haven't got time right now but you're really really very good. It doesn't look like it's been written by an amateur!! I like your style of writing and you've got a creative imagination! I seriously mean it!
And if I'm not wrong, Tolkein inspired you to write this ?

hehehehe thanks very much Yup Tolkien ftw I am working on another scenario now, abandoned this one though i might use it later.

 

[Lorenzo]

http://www.wattpad.com/story/5847300-delirus

Here guys

 

[usama321]

http://www.wattpad.com/story/5847300-delirus

Here guys

that's a good piece of writing I like it. Would only suggest to divide it in paragraphs, the rest is great

 

[Esme]

hehehehe thanks very much Yup Tolkien ftw I am working on another scenario now, abandoned this one though i might use it later.

Share that one too...I'd like to read it