Discussion in 'Games and Fun Stuff' started by robinhoodmustafa, May 19, 2012.
he trembled convulsively
Though being strong
He decided to
End this fear
All the time pronoun "he" is used so why
Hamnah Zahoor, you used, "I".
just a friendly correction.
But Emmris used 'Hovering around ME' that is why i used 'I'.
It was suppose 2 b " I " but Holmes used " he " so we continued with he ....
when someone screamed
(I have changed my ' I ' to ' He ')
Take it from the start re read it from " A thousand years ago" page 177
and get some sense. Correct me if I am wrong.
Though I have attached a quote by you Emmris Kindly review it.
It was never supposed to be "I" as you yourself qouted
Yes but it's season 2 ..... so it can b dat I made the entry ....
My gaze automatically
drifted towards the
Total darkness that
blanketed the castle
Nice. Let's finish this argument and focus on the story.
and saw a
emaciated man charging
His gun with
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